I entered the woof contest again this week. With my poetry the The Eternal Depression.
But this time there were too many entries - much better than mine. This made me realize that - I need to improve more on the way I write and put in some strong feelings in my poetries like the winners did.
The details of the contests and the winners are -
About WritingLisa Alber - “What I Will NOT Do in the Next Few Days” - How I met an anthology deadline in under four days.
Poetry
Chungyen Chang - “when birds breathe” - Visual verse on flight and despair. Please read from the bottom-up.
Robert Bourne - “The Middle years and My Paradoxical Soul” - An inner reflective poem,
Fiction/Prose/Artistry/Monologue
Puneet Kaur - “Standing still...” - The post is a simple painting that has many colours, many shades... time, music, ecstasy, hope.... life in general.... the course that life would take..... and much more!!
Jennifer M Scott - “495 to Baltimore” - Two monologues about illicit love.
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2 comments:
Hey Sanjay, this doesn't mean you don't write well.
Personally I like whatever you write. But I would suggest you improve on your vocabulary.. and the presentation style.
Experiment with words and phrases rather than just rhymes.
Thanks for the suggestions Vridhi. I really appreciate it.
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